Part 6
Coffey on the
Mile
Two days later, on the
eighteenth, Bill Dodge, Hank Bitterman, and someone else – the narrator didn't
remember who, some floater - took John Coffey over to D Block for his shower,
and he with his friends rehearsed his execution while he was gone. There were
no thunderstorms on the night it came John Coffey's turn to walk the Green
Mile. Brutus Howell was out front for this one - he would do the capping and
tell Van Hay to roll when it was time. There weren't many witnesses. Brutal
bent over and plucked the disk of sponge out of its bucket. Water from the
sponge was dripping down the sides of John 's face. John surged forward against
the chest-strap. For a moment his eyes met mine. They were aware; the narrator
was the last thing he saw as us tilted him off the edge of the world. Then he
fell against the seatback, the cap coming askew on his head a little, smoke - a
sort of charry mist - drifting out from beneath it. The hands were limp again,
the formerly bluish-white moons at the base of the fingernails now a deep
eggplant hue, a tendril of smoke rising off cheeks still wet with salt water
from the sponge... and his tears. John Coffey's last tears.
Divide into paragraphs.
ОтветитьУдалить"The narrator didn't remember who" - remember him.
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