(28-38)
Then Stroeve went to narrator’s home and told him that
his wife left him, the narrator was surprised and he wanted to kill Strickland.
Stroeve told the story that he asked Strickland to left his house, Charles
began to pick his surroundings, Blanche told to Stroeve that she left home together
with Strickland. Stroeve began to persuade her to stay with him, but she
remained steady. Than Stroeve decided to leave her, because he didn’t want a
bad live for her. 6 months ago Stroeve rushed in the narrator’s house. He
told that Blanche committed suicide and she was in a hospital. They visited her,
but she didn’t want to see them. During several days she dead. Stroeve was in despite
and decided to be alone. Several days ago Stroeve visited to the narrator and
told him amazing story.
It's getting better!
ОтветитьУдалитьMind the sequence of tenses, pls!
Slips:
... THE narrator's home ...
... told hime that his wife HAD left him ...
... told the story-TELLERthat he HAD asked...
etc